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Episode #1


Name: What should the episode be called...

After we find out what the name will be we will go to the script and drawing board...

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UNTITLED

We have no script now...

Story Board Artists
  • Girdf
  • IZSBHR

    Artists
  • Girdf
  • PC COMICS

    Writers
  • Kobb
  • IZSBHR
  • Girdf

    Voices
  • Kobb

    -- Edited by Girdf at 19:52, 2006-08-24

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    (13)Toast

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    well i got a few ideas....

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    Invader Zim Freaks 3 Creator

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    like what...

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    (10)Invader

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    What if Zim, Gir, Minimoose, and Skoodge sit around and watch TV for about 5 minutes. (I know it's like Zim Eats Waffles, but it could be funny)

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    haha...yezzzz...that be sooo cool...

    But just Zim, Gir, Minimoose, and maybe keef...

    that would be better cus skoodge dont like zim very much...

    they will be watching what tho?

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    Surfing


    They'd be like, flipping through channels and stuff. Or maybe they'd could just watch the Scary Monkey Show. Zim would get bored easily and try to talk to Gir and Minimoose, and...Officer Squidman!

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    RE: Episode #1


    NOOOO...I KNOW THE PERFECT PERSON INSTEAD OF THE OFFICER...THE HAPPY KID...IM HAPPY!!!

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    The Early Morning Television of Imploding Doom

    The Script is finished...

    Now we need...

    1. Voice of Gir
    2. Voice of Zim
    3. Voice of Gaz
    4. Voice of Nick

    "I'm Happy"

    5. Voice of Dib
    6. Someone to make a drawing board and draw characters...(a good artist)
    Someone who can draw Gir, Zim, Minimoose, Nick, Dib, Gaz, and other random stuff...

    You will need to color the pictures after you scan them with a computer program...

    Requirements

    Voices

  • Microphone
  • You will need to sound like the character


    Drawing

  • Scanner
  • Computer Coloring Program...like paint or photoshop


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    Draw three or more of these characters on 1 picture...
    The best drawer wins...

    If you want to be one of these click here...

    Just do what it says to do after you click there...

    -- Edited by Girdf at 16:36, 2005-05-14

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    (13)Toast

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    Im not bad at doing a gir voice

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    (10)Invader

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    Well, i'm not Girdf but you'd probably have to post a sample of you imatating Gir, before you can be hired.

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    If you want to be recruited click here...



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    I could draw it...But not colour it...I don't have a program for that.. x_o



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    Darn I can't get the sample of nick in there.

    -- Edited by GIR at 21:55, 2005-06-08

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    in the next two years i wana create this episode all we need flash 8, Some one to do the voices AKA: a person with a microphone and sounds like a zim character with a basic knollege of attaching files to emails, Prop creater who does his work not in paint, Character creator that can make creations in flash. And i am starting to learn flash and action script so i could pull it togeather oh and everyone must know how to putattachments to emails.


    (Lets get it going people.)


     


          InvaderZig sighning off 



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    Invader Zim Freaks 3 Creator

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    what are you talking about

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    (8)Chair made of Cheese

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    what we need to create an episode of invader zim

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    Invader Zim Freaks 3 Creator

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    we are...

    we already got script

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    (8)Chair made of Cheese

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    ok now we need artwork for the episode

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    I could probably do Gaz's voice. My friends say I sound a lot like her (not just my voice, but the threats I give my annoying brother at times). But I won't have a file of my voice to send until Decamber 12th or so, cause I lent my microphone to a friend. **~Raven~**

    -- Edited by MysteriousRaven at 17:31, 2005-12-06

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    (8)Chair made of Cheese

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    I can do the voice for nick!! The happy kid I really sound like him

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    I could probably help with the artwork...

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    (8)Chair made of Cheese

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    ok...

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    (1)New Hobo

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    Sorry, turns out I won't have the file of my voice in a while. (2 weeks tops) I'll get it as soon as I can! ^^'

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    (8)Chair made of Cheese

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    me too... sry!

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    Invader Zim Freaks 3 Creator

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    ok...

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    I'd really love to be an animator... ^^ I just got tweening to work, I have MCs of expressions and walking cycles (totally made the walking cycles), and I'm always animating. 



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    ok...you seem to be the only other person who knows flash on this board haha

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    I need the script by tomorrow. Personal matter, but I want to start animating immediately, and if I don't have the script by tomorrow, I can't start 'till Tuesday...

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    1. the script is barley finished it was written by me and invader meltman
    2. i have to assign you a part
    3. you need to take your time

    and i will asign you a part later

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    Thanks. I just hoped I could get some animating in that isn't totally improvising   


     



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    haha

    you will have to draw the character you know that...

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    umm...so

    i lost the script...haha

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    Zim could order a pizza or see a bloaty commercial (then I could also voice them, because I do their voice pretty good)

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    sweet well sign up...

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    ok we need a title first...and kobb is the only writer so far...so kobb will write some of it

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    Ok, I've begun writing on it, and this is what is is so far:


    Zim gets tired of watching the Scary Monkey Show, so Zim changes the channel. He sees a bloaty commercial, and gets really hungry. He orders a pizza, but it will take a long time to get there. He has no luck in finding food, and then spots the TV. He decides to pass the time, he will watch TV with Gir, Nick, and Minimoose. I don't have Dib in it yet.


    P.S. I don't have any ideas for a title.



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    an idea for a title:


    Brainwashing Broadcasts and All That Doom.



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    I finished the script! It's a bit short, but it could be stretched with more TV scenes, and is at least 6 minutes long.


    http://www.savefile.com/files/3957056



    -- Edited by Kobb at 14:28, 2006-08-03

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    I can't download a wps file. Sorry.

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    Here it is:


    Brainwashing Broadcasts and All That Doom


     


    Zim and Gir are sitting on the couch. Gir looks down to the side of the couch blankly and turns on the TV. The scary monkey show immediately is shown. Zim and Gir stare at TV for about 5 seconds.


    About every 3 seconds, screen changes, showing Zim looking increasingly annoyed and tired, and gir looking relaxed and a bit bored, still watching the scary monkey show. Finally after about 5 screen changes:


    Zim (Drooling) Gir….Can we stop watching the Scary Monkey.


    Gir completely ignores Zim.


    Zim: Give me that! *Snatches remote from Gir*


    Zim presses button once.


    The TV shows Bloaty standing in the middle of a room with a bunch of kids as normal.


    Bloaty: Hey kids! Wanna have some piggy fun?


    Kids (looking a bit scared) Yeah!


    Bloaty: Then come on over to Bloaty’s Pizza Hog! Come on! Quit just standin’ there, GO TO BLOATIES PIZZA HOG NOW!!!!!!


    Kids (signing theme song) Bloaty’s Pizza Hog! Bloaty’s Pizza Hog!


    Bloaty (while kids sing faintly in background) Bloaty’s Pizza Hog! A fun way to be a kid……uh……*falls asleep*


    Zim turns of TV and Gir cries a little bit.


    Zim: Arg! That horrible filth pig has made my spine grow a hunger for pizza! Hand me the phone, Gir..


    Gir throws the phone at Zim’s face.


    Zim picks up the phone and dials a number. Screen cuts diagonally in half, with zim on the upper-left traingle.


    Pizza Guy: Welcome to Bloaty’s Pizza Hog, home of the bloaties pizza…May I take your ooorder?


    Zim: Yes, yes you may Pizza Slave. 1 large pizza sandwich. DELIVER NOW!


    Pizza Guy: Uhh, I’ll see if can. Whatever. *Hangs UP*


    Zim *stomach growls* Ugh, I need food now! GIR!


    Gir flies into the wall and gets his head stuck right above the TV.



    Zim: *holding stomach* See if there is any human filth in the kitchen.



    Gir walks to the kitchen and flys out immediately.


    Gir: Guess who made wa…


    Zim:….You did. No Gir, I don’t want waffles. I don’t want to eat waffles ever again.


    Gir cries.


    Zim (while walking towards kitchen) Let me see, there has to be some food in here.


    Zim starts digging around the kitchen shelves, pulling out stuff like pigs and GS2’s, but no food is found.


    Zim: No food! I’m going to have to go to the Earth market to buy some food.


    Cuts to Zim at a store with a CLOSED, OK? Sign on it.


    Zim: Closed!?! *opens up radio thing* Gir!


    Gir: (Duty Mode) Yes my master!


    Zim: Bring me back home *coughes* I’ll just wait for the pizza.


    Gir: No thanks! *hangs up*


    Zim: Arg, I’ll just walk home.


    Zim passes by a bunch of TV ads about food (such as oil burgers, pig burritos, moose jerky, ect) for about 7 seconds. It then cuts to him by his house. He walks in all droopy and falls on the couch. He then sees something on TV showing a pig doing karate.


    Zim: EXELLENT! To pass the time of being hungry, I shall WATCH TV! GIR! Bring me Nick and Minimoose! I want to see how my experiments on Nick are going, and, well, Minimoose is just there, um, ya know.


    Gir: Okee Dokee!


    Gir drags in Nick while Minimoose floats in and squeaks.


    Nick (Smiling scary-like) I’m so happy! I’m so HAPPY to watch TV with Zim! He’s my…eeee…BEST FRIEND!!! Hehehehehe!


    Zim: SILENCE! Now, everyone. Prepare your spine for this brainwashing…(confused voice) Telivison……


    Gir: Yay!!! (immediately cuts to the TV with the TV turning on.


    On the TV is a picture of the cyborg from Megadoomer.


    Cyborg: Then all these robots started flyin’ around, and then, I took out a laser, and I blew up the whole place.


    Man in a Cheap Costume: Oh no! The Zombie Robots are baaaaaack!


    Cuts to everyone looking at the TV scared as a bunch of robotic voices and sounds and the screams of the Cyborg and MIACC.


    Zim: Ok, lets watch something that isn’t so….weird.


    Gir grabs the remote in duty mode and switches the channel to the Scary Monkey Movie (which is simply the scary monkey flying around in space with a techno beat music and hitting planets and smiley aliens and suns.)


    Gir: Do da scary monkey dance! Aww yeah! (Gir starts break dancing for about 4 seconds and Zim grabs him by the ear)


    Zim: Gir, no one wants to watch the movie.


    Gir: Aww…..


    Zim attempts to grab the remote from Gir, but he throws it at Nick, and it gets stuck in between his happy probe battery . His eyes start playing random TV scenes and car crashes, moos, and whip sounds are heard in the background.


    Nick: Yeah, now I got TV in my head! Eghehe, SO HAPPY! *squeek noise*


    Zim: Gir, now I’m going to have to fish out that remote in Nick’s head to get the TV working.


    Gir just laughes pointlessly.


    Zim begins pulling on the remote, but gets his hand stuck in the Happy Probe battery.


    Zim (eyes are looking crazy and swirly) I’m soooooo happy! So happy, SO HAPPIE!!


    Zim shakes his head and reverts to normal.


    Zim: Arg, that was stupid (squishing sound) YES! I got it! I got the remote. He manages to push a button, but it stays in Nick’s happy probe thing.


    The TV then shows a group of people in black and says (Men in Black) at the top. It also says Mysterious Mysteries at the bottom-right.


    Zim: Eh?


    TV: The Men in Black, supposed cover-up for alien information, or alien assasins? A man reportedly had seen a Man in Black dragging an alien towards an alien autopsy convention.


    Here’s the footage:


    Zim: No…


    TV shows a man with a black blanket around his bloaty costume, and a green toilet being dragged by the man. He then opens a closet that says Alien Autopsy Convention Tonight, and throws the toilet in.


    Cuts to the door.


    Pizza Guy: Is this Zim’s house, you ordered a pizza.


    TV ( a more realistic man in black) You may be the next victim.


    Camara Circles the living room as Zim sits on the couch rocking back and forth, Nick and Gir laughing, Minomoose flying around in circles around the living room, and the Pizza Guy babbling on (with creepy music in the background)


    Screen turns black.


    Pizza Guy: These pizzas smell really bad.


    End



    -- Edited by Kobb at 15:10, 2006-08-06

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    i like it...but it's a little too short...

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    I know a place for sounds and voices.


    go to
    www.siberkat.com/zimdex.html
    for audio from episodes and other sounds.


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    RE: Episode #1


    I'll be a writer. I'll revise Kobb's script. I'll keep it the same, just make it longer!


     


     BTW:


     


    Loved it!


     



    -- Edited by IZSBHR at 01:45, 2006-08-08

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    so, what does everyone think of the title?

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    I love it.

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    Thanks! I really wanted to stay away from using doom in our first eppy, but it wouldn't be as good without it.


    Also, might I suggest another TV scene in which Mysterious Mysteries of Strange Mystery is showing an episode on pumkin goblins or something. Good idea?



    -- Edited by Kobb at 17:13, 2006-08-10

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    Kobb wrote:



    Thanks! I really wanted to stay away from using doom in our first eppy, but it wouldn't be as good without it.


    Also, might I suggest another TV scene in which Mysterious Mysteries of Strange Mystery is showing an episode on pumkin goblins or something. Good idea?



    -- Edited by Kobb at 17:13, 2006-08-10




     


    ZIM: And now to--


     


    Announcer: And now, the pumpkin goblins give birth to a two-headed elvis cloned sea monster of dreaded gargantuen proportions.


     


    ZIM:...


     


    (LOUD CRASH, MONSTER FLIES THROUGH WINDOW, SCREEN GOES DARK, WEN IT COMESBACK, ZIM IS BEATEN UP AND THE KITCHEN IS IN SHAMBLES. WHY AM I TALKING IN ALL CAPS?)


     ZIM: NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Stupid two-headed elvis cloned sea monster of dreaded gargantuen proportions!!!!!


    The monster rears its two gargantuen Elvis-monster heads torwards ZIM.


    ZIM fights it using a series of dodges, grabbing weapons to fight it (extended scene), and it eventually flies away.


    ZIM: That... coulda... gone... better... on to NICK!!!! 


    Pumpkin Goblins: Curse you, ZIM!!!! CUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRSSSSEEEEEE YOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!



    -- Edited by IZSBHR at 06:33, 2006-08-11

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    Is it ok if I edit that a little bit? If so, here's the new script:


    Here it is:



     


    Brainwashing Broadcasts and All That Doom



     


     



     


    Zim and Gir are sitting on the couch. Gir looks down to the side of the couch blankly and turns on the TV. The scary monkey show immediately is shown. Zim and Gir stare at TV for about 5 seconds.



     


    About every 3 seconds, screen changes, showing Zim looking increasingly annoyed and tired, and gir looking relaxed and a bit bored, still watching the scary monkey show. Finally after about 5 screen changes:



     


    Zim (Drooling) Gir….Can we stop watching the Scary Monkey.



     


    Gir completely ignores Zim.



     


    Zim: Give me that! *Snatches remote from Gir*



     


    Zim presses button once.



     


    The TV shows Bloaty standing in the middle of a room with a bunch of kids as normal.



     


    Bloaty: Hey kids! Wanna have some piggy fun?



     


    Kids (looking a bit scared) Yeah!



     


    Bloaty: Then come on over to Bloaty’s Pizza Hog! Come on! Quit just standin’ there, GO TO BLOATIES PIZZA HOG NOW!!!!!!



     


    Kids (signing theme song) Bloaty’s Pizza Hog! Bloaty’s Pizza Hog!



     


    Bloaty (while kids sing faintly in background) Bloaty’s Pizza Hog! A fun way to be a kid……uh……*falls asleep*



     


    Zim turns of TV and Gir cries a little bit.



     


    Zim: Arg! That horrible filth pig has made my spine grow a hunger for pizza! Hand me the phone, Gir..



     


    Gir throws the phone at Zim’s face.



     


    Zim picks up the phone and dials a number. Screen cuts diagonally in half, with zim on the upper-left traingle.



     


    Pizza Guy: Welcome to Bloaty’s Pizza Hog, home of the bloaties pizza…May I take your ooorder?



     


    Zim: Yes, yes you may Pizza Slave. 1 large pizza sandwich. DELIVER NOW!



     


    Pizza Guy: Uhh, I’ll see if can. Whatever. *Hangs UP*



     


    Zim *stomach growls* Ugh, I need food now! GIR!



     


    Gir flies into the wall and gets his head stuck right above the TV.



     



    Zim: *holding stomach* See if there is any human filth in the kitchen.



     



    Gir walks to the kitchen and flys out immediately.



     


    Gir: Guess who made wa…



     


    Zim:….You did. No Gir, I don’t want waffles. I don’t want to eat waffles ever again.



     


    Gir cries.



     


    Zim (while walking towards kitchen) Let me see, there has to be some food in here.



     


    Zim starts digging around the kitchen shelves, pulling out stuff like pigs and GS2’s, but no food is found.



     


    Zim: No food! I’m going to have to go to the Earth market to buy some food.



     


    Cuts to Zim at a store with a CLOSED, OK? Sign on it.



     


    Zim: Closed!?! *opens up radio thing* Gir!



     


    Gir: (Duty Mode) Yes my master!



     


    Zim: Bring me back home *coughes* I’ll just wait for the pizza.



     


    Gir: No thanks! *hangs up*



     


    Zim: Arg, I’ll just walk home.



     


    Zim passes by a bunch of TV ads about food (such as oil burgers, pig burritos, moose jerky, ect) for about 7 seconds. It then cuts to him by his house. He walks in all droopy and falls on the couch. He then sees something on TV showing a pig doing karate.



     


    Zim: EXELLENT! To pass the time of being hungry, I shall WATCH TV! GIR! Bring me Nick and Minimoose! I want to see how my experiments on Nick are going, and, well, Minimoose is just there, um, ya know.



     


    Gir: Okee Dokee!



     


    Gir drags in Nick while Minimoose floats in and squeaks.



     


    Nick (Smiling scary-like) I’m so happy! I’m so HAPPY to watch TV with Zim! He’s my…eeee…BEST FRIEND!!! Hehehehehe!



     


    Zim: SILENCE! Now, everyone. Prepare your spine for this brainwashing…(confused voice) Telivison……


    Gir: Yay!!! (immediately cuts to the TV with the TV turning on.)


    Mysteries Mysteries Host: Pumkin Goblins, the sought-for creatures of the 12th century (shows a picture of a pumpkin with weird legs looking really scared, then scrolls to the top-left and shows a knight with a net, then zooms out to show both)


    While that's being shown:


    Host: Knights would hunt these creature for their magical pumkin juices, while craftsmen would use the hide for a special pig-flavored helm.


    Screen Cuts to bill live with 2 scientists poking a pumkin golbin with an electric thingy.


    Bill: Scientists and Paranormal Investigators alike are on the case to solving the juciy mystery of the Pumkin Goblins.


    Cuts to Zim and Gir oddly looking a bit curious. Then offscreen:


    Scientist: NO!!! YOU GAVE IT TOO MUCH!!! *PUMKIN ROARS*


    Shows TV again. The punkin goblin's looks a lot tougher and bigger, and eats one of the scientists.


    Zim hears another scream from the pumpkin.


    Zim: Ah! This scream! *antennae twitch oddly* How is it so loud.


    A crash is heard and the screen pans to a back view of Zim's house. Offscreen:


    Zim: PUMPKIN GOBLIN!


    Zim runs around his house tripping over the couch a few times and then grabs a light and shines it at the pumkin goblin. The pumkin punches the light and 2 seconds later the light catches fire in Zim's hand as he throws it outside.


    Zim: GIR! DEFEND YOUR MASTER!


    Gir: *Duty Mode* Yes my lord! *Normal* PUMPKIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    Gir runs straight towards the pumkin and tackles him. Gir is laying face-down of the pumpkin. Slirping noises are heard as the pumpkin slowly shrinks.


    Pumpkin Goblin: Curse you, ZIM!!!! CUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRSSSSEEEEEE YOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!


    Pumkin Goblin melts away into orange goo, as Gir stands there comletely orange.


    Stupid inferior Pumkin Goblin beast of dreaded gargantuen proportions!!!!! Now, to watch more.... Telivision!


    Gir: YAY!


    On the TV is a picture of the cyborg from Megadoomer.



     


    Cyborg: Then all these robots started flyin’ around, and then, I took out a laser, and I blew up the whole place.



     


    Man in a Cheap Costume: Oh no! The Zombie Robots are baaaaaack!



     


    Cuts to everyone looking at the TV scared as a bunch of robotic voices and sounds and the screams of the Cyborg and MIACC.



     


    Zim: Ok, lets watch something that isn’t so….weird.



     


    Gir grabs the remote in duty mode and switches the channel to the Scary Monkey Movie (which is simply the scary monkey flying around in space with a techno beat music and hitting planets and smiley aliens and suns.)



     


    Gir: Do da scary monkey dance! Aww yeah! (Gir starts break dancing for about 4 seconds and Zim grabs him by the ear)



     


    Zim: Gir, no one wants to watch the movie.



     


    Gir: Aww…..



     


    Zim attempts to grab the remote from Gir, but he throws it at Nick, and it gets stuck in between his happy probe battery . His eyes start playing random TV scenes and car crashes, moos, and whip sounds are heard in the background.



     


    Nick: Yeah, now I got TV in my head! Eghehe, SO HAPPY! *squeek noise*



     


    Zim: Gir, now I’m going to have to fish out that remote in Nick’s head to get the TV working.



     


    Gir just laughes pointlessly.



     


    Zim begins pulling on the remote, but gets his hand stuck in the Happy Probe battery.



     


    Zim (eyes are looking crazy and swirly) I’m soooooo happy! So happy, SO HAPPIE!!



     


    Zim shakes his head and reverts to normal.



     


    Zim: Arg, that was stupid (squishing sound) YES! I got it! I got the remote. He manages to push a button, but it stays in Nick’s happy probe thing.



     


    The TV then shows a group of people in black and says (Men in Black) at the top. It also says Mysterious Mysteries at the bottom-right.



     


    Zim: Eh?



     


    TV: The Men in Black, supposed cover-up for alien information, or alien assasins? A man reportedly had seen a Man in Black dragging an alien towards an alien autopsy convention.



     


    Here’s the footage:



     


    Zim: No…



     


    TV shows a man with a black blanket around his bloaty costume, and a green toilet being dragged by the man. He then opens a closet that says Alien Autopsy Convention Tonight, and throws the toilet in.



     


    Cuts to the door.



     


    Pizza Guy: Is this Zim’s house, you ordered a pizza.



     


    TV ( a more realistic man in black) You may be the next victim.



     


    Camara Circles the living room as Zim sits on the couch rocking back and forth, Nick and Gir laughing, Minomoose flying around in circles around the living room, and the Pizza Guy babbling on (with creepy music in the background)


     


    Screen turns black.


    Pizza Guy: These pizzas smell really bad.


    End


     


    I mostly just extended the fight scene. If you don't like it, I'll get rid of it.



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    It was great.


     


    How 'bout at one part we have something like a wierd  commercial... featuring kids playing with a mongoose.



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    Here it is:




     



    Brainwashing Broadcasts and All That Doom




     



     




     



    Zim and Gir are sitting on the couch. Gir looks down to the side of the couch blankly and turns on the TV. The scary monkey show immediately is shown. Zim and Gir stare at TV for about 5 seconds.




     



    About every 3 seconds, screen changes, showing Zim looking increasingly annoyed and tired, and gir looking relaxed and a bit bored, still watching the scary monkey show. Finally after about 5 screen changes:




     



    Zim (Drooling) Gir….Can we stop watching the Scary Monkey.




     



    Gir completely ignores Zim.




     



    Zim: Give me that! *Snatches remote from Gir*




     



    Zim presses button once.




     



    The TV shows Bloaty standing in the middle of a room with a bunch of kids as normal.




     



    Bloaty: Hey kids! Wanna have some piggy fun?




     



    Kids (looking a bit scared) Yeah!




     



    Bloaty: Then come on over to Bloaty’s Pizza Hog! Come on! Quit just standin’ there, GO TO BLOATIES PIZZA HOG NOW!!!!!!




     



    Kids (signing theme song) Bloaty’s Pizza Hog! Bloaty’s Pizza Hog!




     



    Bloaty (while kids sing faintly in background) Bloaty’s Pizza Hog! A fun way to be a kid……uh……*falls asleep*




     



    Zim turns of TV and Gir cries a little bit.




     



    Zim: Arg! That horrible filth pig has made my spine grow a hunger for pizza! Hand me the phone, Gir..




     



    Gir throws the phone at Zim’s face.




     



    Zim picks up the phone and dials a number. Screen cuts diagonally in half, with zim on the upper-left traingle.




     



    Pizza Guy: Welcome to Bloaty’s Pizza Hog, home of the bloaties pizza…May I take your ooorder?




     



    Zim: Yes, yes you may Pizza Slave. 1 large pizza sandwich. DELIVER NOW!




     



    Pizza Guy: Uhh, I’ll see if can. Whatever. *Hangs UP*




     



    Zim *stomach growls* Ugh, I need food now! GIR!




     



    Gir flies into the wall and gets his head stuck right above the TV.




     




    Zim: *holding stomach* See if there is any human filth in the kitchen.




     




    Gir walks to the kitchen and flys out immediately.




     



    Gir: Guess who made wa…




     



    Zim:….You did. No Gir, I don’t want waffles. I don’t want to eat waffles ever again.




     



    Gir cries.




     



    Zim (while walking towards kitchen) Let me see, there has to be some food in here.




     



    Zim starts digging around the kitchen shelves, pulling out stuff like pigs and GS2’s, but no food is found.




     



    Zim: No food! I’m going to have to go to the Earth market to buy some food.




     



    Cuts to Zim at a store with a CLOSED, OK? Sign on it.




     



    Zim: Closed!?! *opens up radio thing* Gir!




     



    Gir: (Duty Mode) Yes my master!




     



    Zim: Bring me back home *coughes* I’ll just wait for the pizza.




     



    Gir: No thanks! *hangs up*




     



    Zim: Arg, I’ll just walk home.




     



    Zim passes by a bunch of TV ads about food (such as oil burgers, pig burritos, moose jerky, ect) for about 7 seconds. It then cuts to him by his house. He walks in all droopy and falls on the couch. He then sees something on TV showing a pig doing karate.




     



    Zim: EXELLENT! To pass the time of being hungry, I shall WATCH TV! GIR! Bring me Nick and Minimoose! I want to see how my experiments on Nick are going, and, well, Minimoose is just there, um, ya know.




     



    Gir: Okee Dokee!




     



    Gir drags in Nick while Minimoose floats in and squeaks.




     



    Nick (Smiling scary-like) I’m so happy! I’m so HAPPY to watch TV with Zim! He’s my…eeee…BEST FRIEND!!! Hehehehehe!




     



    Zim: SILENCE! Now, everyone. Prepare your spine for this brainwashing…(confused voice) Telivison……



    Gir: Yay!!! (immediately cuts to the TV with the TV turning on.)



    Mysteries Mysteries Host: Pumkin Goblins, the sought-for creatures of the 12th century (shows a picture of a pumpkin with weird legs looking really scared, then scrolls to the top-left and shows a knight with a net, then zooms out to show both)



    While that's being shown:



    Host: Knights would hunt these creature for their magical pumkin juices, while craftsmen would use the hide for a special pig-flavored helm.



    Screen Cuts to bill live with 2 scientists poking a pumkin golbin with an electric thingy.



    Bill: Scientists and Paranormal Investigators alike are on the case to solving the juciy mystery of the Pumkin Goblins.



    Cuts to Zim and Gir oddly looking a bit curious. Then offscreen:



    Scientist: NO!!! YOU GAVE IT TOO MUCH!!! *PUMKIN ROARS*



    Shows TV again. The punkin goblin's looks a lot tougher and bigger, and eats one of the scientists.



    Zim hears another scream from the pumpkin.



    Zim: Ah! This scream! *antennae twitch oddly* How is it so loud.



    A crash is heard and the screen pans to a back view of Zim's house. Offscreen:



    Zim: PUMPKIN GOBLIN!



    Zim runs around his house tripping over the couch a few times and then grabs a light and shines it at the pumkin goblin. The pumkin punches the light and 2 seconds later the light catches fire in Zim's hand as he throws it outside.



    Zim: GIR! DEFEND YOUR MASTER!



    Gir: *Duty Mode* Yes my lord! *Normal* PUMPKIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



    Gir runs straight towards the pumkin and tackles him. Gir is laying face-down of the pumpkin. Slirping noises are heard as the pumpkin slowly shrinks.



    Pumpkin Goblin: Curse you, ZIM!!!! CUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRSSSSEEEEEE YOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!



    Pumkin Goblin melts away into orange goo, as Gir stands there comletely orange.



    Stupid inferior Pumkin Goblin beast of dreaded gargantuen proportions!!!!! Now, to watch more.... Telivision!



    Gir: YAY!



    On the TV is a picture of the cyborg from Megadoomer.



    Cyborg: Then all these robots started flyin’ around, and then, I took out a laser, and I blew up the whole place.




     



    Man in a Cheap Costume: Oh no! The Zombie Robots are baaaaaack!




     



    Cuts to everyone looking at the TV scared as a bunch of robotic voices and sounds and the screams of the Cyborg and MIACC.




     



    Zim: Ok, lets watch something that isn’t so….weird.


    TV changes to kids holding hands circling a fat, blobby mongoose-looking thingy.


    Narrator: Introducing the mongoose maniac 2000! Oh my gosh!!!!! Look at it go!


    Babyish music plays.


    Mongoose oddly rolls towards a little boy standing there looking at him happily. The mongoose then flings up and grabs the kid's entire head with his mouth, and falls stupidly on the ground.


    The kid, still being eaten, gives a thumbs up as he is slowly completely devowered by the mongoose.


    Mongoose Maniac 2000! Get it now! COMEON, NOW!!!!!!!!!!


    Zim looks shocked and quickly changes the channel to the Superweapon TV Giveaway.


    Zim: Mmmmhumm! I could use some of those superweapons.......Hmm, a super-laser-cannon.......I've been wanting one of those!


    Gir: Boring!


    Gir grabs the remote in duty mode and switches the channel to the Scary Monkey Movie (which is simply the scary monkey flying around in space with a techno beat music and hitting planets and smiley aliens and suns.)




     



    Gir: Do da scary monkey dance! Aww yeah! (Gir starts break dancing for about 4 seconds and Zim grabs him by the ear)




     



    Zim: Gir, no one wants to watch the movie.




     



    Gir: Aww…..




     



    Zim attempts to grab the remote from Gir, but he throws it at Nick, and it gets stuck in between his happy probe battery . His eyes start playing random TV scenes and car crashes, moos, and whip sounds are heard in the background.




     



    Nick: Yeah, now I got TV in my head! Eghehe, SO HAPPY! *squeek noise*




     



    Zim: Gir, now I’m going to have to fish out that remote in Nick’s head to get the TV working.




     



    Gir just laughes pointlessly.




     



    Zim begins pulling on the remote, but gets his hand stuck in the Happy Probe battery.




     



    Zim (eyes are looking crazy and swirly) I’m soooooo happy! So happy, SO HAPPIE!!




     



    Zim shakes his head and reverts to normal.




     



    Zim: Arg, that was stupid (squishing sound) YES! I got it! I got the remote. He manages to push a button, but it stays in Nick’s happy probe thing.




     



    The TV then shows a group of people in black and says (Men in Black) at the top. It also says Mysterious Mysteries at the bottom-right.




     



    Zim: Eh?




     



    TV: The Men in Black, supposed cover-up for alien information, or alien assasins? A man reportedly had seen a Man in Black dragging an alien towards an alien autopsy convention.




     



    Here’s the footage:




     



    Zim: No…




     



    TV shows a man with a black blanket around his bloaty costume, and a green toilet being dragged by the man. He then opens a closet that says Alien Autopsy Convention Tonight, and throws the toilet in.




     



    Cuts to the door.




     



    Pizza Guy: Is this Zim’s house, you ordered a pizza.




     



    TV ( a more realistic man in black) You may be the next victim.




     



    Camara Circles the living room as Zim sits on the couch rocking back and forth, Nick and Gir laughing, Minomoose flying around in circles around the living room, and the Pizza Guy babbling on (with creepy music in the background)



     



    Screen turns black.



    Pizza Guy: These pizzas smell really bad.



    End



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